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First annotated assignment:
The aim of the report was clearly, which was the investigate the effect of T1D on Gria3 gnu expression in rat brains. Before doing the report, I was planing the outline for each section and each subsection, such as in introduction. I wrote the most important points firstly and then found references to fill into the outline. The another improvement in this report is more logical and reasonable as most of the leading sentences were added at beginning of report. However, grammar and spelling problems still exits in this report, I need put more effort in this aspect.
Second annotated assignment:
This assignment was the manuscript for the CELL Journal. The understanding of the aim in this assignment was deeper than previous one, and because the project of this report was processed in whole semester, in the usage of language was not very precise and briefly. By using the principles of effective writing, the outline with dot points for each section and subsection had been used before start writing. In the abstract part, the aims and the main results of this project are clearly and simple, and subtitles were added in result section made informations and data more clear to read, and the logical thinking are more than before.
The principles for communicating effectively in writing
The aim of the report was clearly, which was the investigate the effect of T1D on Gria3 gnu expression in rat brains. Before doing the report, I was planing the outline for each section and each subsection, such as in introduction. I wrote the most important points firstly and then found references to fill into the outline. The another improvement in this report is more logical and reasonable as most of the leading sentences were added at beginning of report. However, grammar and spelling problems still exits in this report, I need put more effort in this aspect.
Second annotated assignment:
This assignment was the manuscript for the CELL Journal. The understanding of the aim in this assignment was deeper than previous one, and because the project of this report was processed in whole semester, in the usage of language was not very precise and briefly. By using the principles of effective writing, the outline with dot points for each section and subsection had been used before start writing. In the abstract part, the aims and the main results of this project are clearly and simple, and subtitles were added in result section made informations and data more clear to read, and the logical thinking are more than before.
The principles for communicating effectively in writing